Pitch Feedback

Group 1:
- Lots of information and ideas
- Generally got ideas and concept. I like it
- Might be some difficulty trying to get the ideas across of being a prostitute and hospital location

Group 2:
- Great song choice and the whole video idea
- The pitch was very strong as well
- Narrative is strong too

Group 3:
- Subject is serious if implied it may make it look less serious

Group 4:
- Good song choice
- Strong narrative
- Audience may feel uneasy at the content
- Had a clear view of idea
- Could be unconvincing

Group 5:
- May struggle to make topic of prostitution appropriate for target audience of 13 year olds
- Idea seems very similar to the original   

Group 6:
- Prostitution for 13 years old could prove problematic
- Also seems quite similar to "The A Team"

Group 7:
- Narrative could be quite complicated in places
- Death could be unconvincing if not done well- needs to be carefully done.
-If good actors, it could be pulled off very well

Group 8:
- Idea is very close to the original songs video
- Could be hard to represent without being too graphic
- But overall a good idea that isn't a very typical video

Group 9:
-The could have difficulty filming certain things:
-Hospital
- Area's involving the Pimp's abuse